rate this poem one to ten please and tell me what you think?where are the free thinkers?
hexagon maze.
sage burning in autumn air.
crying into a styrofoam coffee cup.
shut up.
i want to squeeze your face hard.
sleeping with the end of me.
my heros choke on vomit.
i found this lamp of brass.
i polished it.
i made a wish but...
you're still here.
is my eye liner running?
plasma on my quilt.
spasms on my quill.
carnage on the page.
packs of shit eatin dogs.
hampster guts and tape worms.
sprawling like suburbia.
i find unwilling minds to occupy.
occupied minds unwiiling to find me.
signs to know your ass from your elbow.
shake the pin ball machine.
get the points.
stab an old woman with a screwdriver.
give a fat infant a shoe horn.
cream cheese and obesity cakes.
a sewer rat ate my cat.
i'd dye my hair but i have cancer.
i don't have hair.
being a burn victim seems luxurious.
can i have my enthusiasm back?
dude where is my cuntree?
these colors don't take kindly to coloreds.
fin.
Answer by nan
on a scale of one to ten?.......00
Answer by towel 42
8
mainly because you didn't follow any poetry "rules," it's just freestyle. I love when poems are freestyle.
Answer by Quarter Midget Mom
-25
Answer by Ava
A rating of one is being kind I'm sorry to say. Keep trying!
Answer by ladyjamie28
I have read a few pomes in my life time but this one is so filled with sickness. I think you need to acually sit and read it your self it still needs lot's of work. I would give you a 2 . Fix it and maby I will change my mind.........
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